Everyone has a different method for writing stories. Here’s mine, with some tongue in cheek š
- Get busy doing something. Preferably somewhere that you can’t use a pen. a) driving is good; b) go for a run; c) take the dog for a walk; d) going to the toilet works too!
- Inspiration will strike!
- When inspiration strikes, repeat the story idea in your head over and over until you can a) park the car; b) stop running; c) find a park bench; d) wash your hands!
- Once you have stopped your activity, grab pen and paper and write down your idea before it slips away forever! If I don’t have pen/paper with me, I record the start of the story on my phone.
- Ponder idea. Let it percolate through your brain for as long as it takes. This could be hours, days, weeks, months, years! The story will formulate clearly when the time is right. Repeat your mantra of “There’s a story in there somewhere” as often as possible to provide comfort.
- Write, write, write!
- Edit.
- Re-write.
- Repeat steps 7 & 8 as required.
- Protect the story and your heart until it is ready to be shared, and you are ready to share.
The story of how stories are created can be as joyful and interesting as the stories themselves. I’ve written previously about the origins of Lum, Animalympics, Brave Brian and Monster Bites, but there are plenty of other stories I’ve penned which have fun starts and I’d like to share one with you here.
Misheard Names
When my son was very small he loved Star Wars and Lego, so putting those together was almost more excitement than we could cope with. Imagine our delight when we discovered Lego Star Wars Movies! One day, we sat down to watch Bombad Bounty. We were entranced from start to finish. Luckily it was only 20 minutes long – lucky for him as he was only little and couldn’t sit still for long, and lucky for me because I’m not good at sitting still either! As the film ended my son said to me “Which one was Barry?” Puzzled, I asked what he meant. “The film is called Big Bad Barry, I don’t know which one is Barry.” When I stopped giggling, I repeated my mantra, wrote down the name and knew that Big Bad Barry would get his story, and maybe, one day, his own film.
Not long after the Big Bad Barry moment, it was followed up with See-Through Tom. A mishead rendition of Tree-Fu Tom. Did you watch him on CBBC? My daughter and I loved that programme.
So, with Big Bad Barry and See-Through Tom in my head, I had no choice but to give them a story. You can read it below.
Making Friends
Barry had a problem
He hid it from his Dad
He didnāt want his Mum to say
“Heās just a growing lad”
Barry was a big boy
Tall and big and strong
He liked to run and shout a lot
Other children thought it wrong
When Barry went to school each day
He didnāt like it there
Other children wouldnāt play with him
He wanted to hug his bear
The other children ran away
They called him a nasty name:
āBig Bad Barryā they would chant
It really was a shame
Barry wanted to tell them
He couldnāt help his size
That he wanted to be friends
If only theyād see his sad eyes
Then one day he met a boy
Who heād never ever seen
Tom and Barry played all day
Barry asked where Tom had been
Tom had a problem
It really was unfair
He was such a small and quiet boy
No-one saw him there
Ā āI call myself a nicknameā
Tom told Barry sadly
āI call myself āSee-Through Tomā
It really hurts so badly.ā
See-Through Tom and Big Bad Barry
Vowed to change their names
Theyād show the other children
And be allowed to join in games
Barry and Tom played together
They played hop scotch and run
They laughed together, joked about
It really was such fun
Children came to see the friends
They watched them playing games
Barry is no longer āBig Bad Barryā
No more nasty names
Barry and Tom are best friends
Tom now knows heās seen
Heās forgotten what he called himself
And no-oneās ever mean.
Underlying Messages in Stories
You can see from the story that it is all about accepting yourself and being kind to others. However, it really did just start with the boys’ names and grow from there. I never start a story by thinking of a ‘theme’ or ‘message’ that I want to get across. Sometimes, I don’t even see the underlying theme or message until someone else points it out.
I have not shared Big Bad Barry and See-Through Tom before. I hope you enjoyed reading their story. It’s on stage 6 of my list. I might send it off to be edited one day. I’m not sure that it is a story that could become a book. Not all stories do. Sometimes, it’s just fun to write and not add any pressure to produce the next book.
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